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Harmony

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First RP back with Gem here. I tried something very different for me, and I’m curious if it landed.

Please let me know! Thanks!

Gemini,

I liked the flower references and playful nature of the font that matched the promo perfectly. Inserting the camera and the photography was a nice touch as well. 

Well done.

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I wasn't around for the original Gemini runs, but it was a good read! Felt a lot softer in terms of tone than I'm used to from you, but I think it worked out nicely!

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I really like the voice you've struck here. It's a balance I'm trying to find with Sunshine, but I think that comes through really well in your work.

This works well for a multi person match, as the analogy was well controlled throughout. I'd be interested to see Gemini in this style on a regular promo focused on a single opponent. I think keep working from this place, I'll be a regular reader to see how this version of her evolves.

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