Warnings Heeded

Quote from Wolf Fang Ayame on 8 November 2024, 09:26https://www.weareosw.co.uk/warnings-heeded
Tried something new. Not sure which fit me better format wise but yeah
Tried something new. Not sure which fit me better format wise but yeah

Quote from Anton Savor on 13 November 2024, 06:47i enjoyed reading this promo. i think this new style you're testing out could work well for you if you stick to it and keep building on it.
as far as feedback might go, i dont wanna mess up your process cause i think youre finding your way but i would say try to keep working towards always having a clear focus and structure for your promo. too many ideas and talking points floating around in a promo might make it feel a little scattered and a little difficult to understand the main point i guess.
but again i enjoyed this one so just keep going. you’re doing great.
i enjoyed reading this promo. i think this new style you're testing out could work well for you if you stick to it and keep building on it.
as far as feedback might go, i dont wanna mess up your process cause i think youre finding your way but i would say try to keep working towards always having a clear focus and structure for your promo. too many ideas and talking points floating around in a promo might make it feel a little scattered and a little difficult to understand the main point i guess.
but again i enjoyed this one so just keep going. you’re doing great.